comparison main/NetworkPermissionTester.cpp @ 583:684a917e2d96

Bitbucket -> Sourcehut, and subrepo update

 	QLabel *label = new QLabel;
 	label->setWordWrap(true);
 	label->setText
 	    (QCoreApplication::translate
 	     ("NetworkPermissionTester",
-	      "<h2>Tony: a tool for melody annotation</h2>"
+	      "<h2>Welcome to Tony!</h2>"
 	      "<p><img src=\":icons/qm-logo-smaller.png\" style=\"float:right\">Tony is a program for computer-assisted pitch and note annotation of unaccompanied melody.</p>"
-	      "<p>Developed in the Centre for Digital Music at Queen Mary, University of London, Tony is provided free as open source software under the GNU General Public License.</p>"
+	      "<p>Developed in the Centre for Digital Music at Queen Mary, University of London, Tony is open source software under the GNU General Public License.</p>"
               "<p><hr></p>"
 	      "<p><b>Before we go on...</b></p>"
 	      "<p>Tony needs to make occasional network requests to our servers.</p>"
 	      "<p>This is to:</p>"
-	      "<ul><li> tell you when updates are available.</li></ul>"
-	      "<p>No personal information will be sent, no tracking is carried out, and all requests happen in the background without interrupting your work.</p>"
-	      "<p>We recommend that you allow this. But if you do not wish to do so, please un-check the box below.<br></p>"));
+	      "<ul><li> Tell you when updates are available.</li></ul>"
+	      "<p><b>No personal information will be sent, no tracking is carried out, and no individual information will be shared with anyone else.</b> We will however make aggregate counts of distinct requests for usage reporting.</p>"
+             "<p>We recommend that you allow this, because it makes Tony more useful to you and supports the public funding of this work. But if you do not wish to allow it, please un-check the box below.<br></p>"));
 	layout->addWidget(label, 0, 0);
 
 	QCheckBox *cb = new QCheckBox(QCoreApplication::translate("NetworkPermissionTester", "Allow this"));
 	cb->setChecked(true);
 	layout->addWidget(cb, 1, 0);