# HG changeset patch
# User Chris Cannam
# Date 1316984431 -3600
# Node ID 9e9c38c57b1ff888b6cb657feb981cbd60bc056d
# Parent  cfd78be7676ba4b494c060fc34f5e26b8fecd928
tiny change to TODOs only

diff -r cfd78be7676b -r 9e9c38c57b1f cannam.tex
--- a/cannam.tex	Sun Sep 25 21:58:26 2011 +0100
+++ b/cannam.tex	Sun Sep 25 22:00:31 2011 +0100
@@ -463,8 +463,9 @@
   provenance etc]
 
 [2. Version control and related facilities -- provide, encourage
-  people to use, make it simple -- use our facilities if you like --
-  encourage people to use it for papers as well!]
+  people to use, make it simple -- show your people it, don't just
+  tell them -- use our facilities if you like -- encourage people to
+  use it for papers as well!]
 
 [3. Produce plugins and deliberately target end-user applications]