# HG changeset patch
# User Chris Cannam
# Date 1313409775 -3600
# Node ID 42ff821235cd490b56758aba57c6bd781ba84c85
# Parent  815273d56c819b17f70af0dee74858f15858a750# Parent  753051f9ee330b5e9ee3fd6ca2b8ea5cb1ca444c
Merge

diff -r 753051f9ee33 -r 42ff821235cd index.html
--- a/index.html	Mon Jul 25 16:13:11 2011 +0100
+++ b/index.html	Mon Aug 15 13:02:55 2011 +0100
@@ -24,10 +24,12 @@
 <div id="page">
 <p><big>EasyMercurial is a simple user interface for the <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/">Mercurial</a> distributed version control system.  It's free, open source, and cross-platform.  </big></p>
 
-<p>Our aim has been to make EasyMercurial straightforward to teach and learn.<br>It uses a friendly graph representation for history, to make
-branching and merging easier to understand: it makes common working
-patterns easy to find and learn, particularly when using a shared
-remote repository: and it is consistent across platforms.</p>
+<p>We have tried to make EasyMercurial straightforward to teach and
+learn.<br>It makes common working patterns easy to follow,
+particularly when using a shared remote repository: it uses a friendly
+graph representation for the change history, to make branching and
+merging easier to understand: and it looks and behaves consistently
+across platforms.</p>
 
 <p>EasyMercurial is not designed for large projects or for very
 experienced users, and there are other Mercurial interfaces that